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Chain of Feathers

A Fantasy LitRPG Adventure (Iron Tyrant, Book 1)

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Chain of Feathers

By: Seth Ring
Narrated by: Ramón De Ocampo
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Roll over and die, or become so strong nothing can stop him.

Cast into a brutal military camp by his once loving master, Mateo feels like the last six wonderful years of his life have been a lie. With the mysteries surrounding him growing, Mateo knows that his only option is to become one of the supernaturally powerful Duelists and grow in power until he can take his fate into his own hands.

That plan is thwarted from the beginning when he gets stuck with the lowest-ranked Root Card against his will, ensuring that his growth as a Duelist will always be excruciatingly slow. To make matters worse, the camp he has been thrown into is completely cutthroat, and survival isn’t guaranteed by a long shot.

Saddled with two other kids that he has never met before and a crow spirit bound to him by an ethereal chain, Mateo will need every ounce of courage, resilience, and mental acuity he can muster if he wants to make it out of the training camp alive.

Don't miss the start of the next great Fantasy LitRPG Series by Seth Ring, author of the best-selling Battle Mage Famer and Nova Terra. Grab your copy today and join Mateo as he ascends through the flames of war.

About the Series: Following a weak-to-strong protagonist, this series mixes epic fantasy action, mystery, cultivation, and a world with endless depth where little is as it first appears. This LitRPG/GameLit series is perfect for listeners who enjoy exploring rich worlds and complex characters.

©2024 Seth Ring (P)2024 Dreamscape Lore
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Loved it !! Brilliantly written and an awesome narration. I can't wait for the 3rd installment as the 2nd was just as good !!

Brilliant !!!

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Excellent Book, can't wait to read book 2 next.
My only minor gripe is the cards don't have any major impact till halfway through the book but the foundation is set for an exciting series.

Slow start to an excellent story

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Great worldbuilding and mystery, even if the card-based system and teen tone aren’t for everyone.

A surprisingly enjoyable listen despite not being my usual thing. While the teenage protagonist and card-based system didn’t fully click for me, the worldbuilding, overarching mysteries, and excellent narration carried the story. Seth Ring continues to show why he's one of the most consistent voices in LitRPG. A bit too sanitised in tone, but still compelling enough that I’ll continue the series.

Great worldbuilding, odd mechanics

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The story is pretty good and had a lot of potential, even if most of it was wasted due to lazy writing and having one of the most idiotic MC's in any fantasy story so far.

Not only do the training methods make absolutely no sense at all and the survival tricks are mostly wrong, but the attitudes and actions of the recruits are as idiotic and unnatural as how a modern high school student from USA would react, rather than how slaves conditioned to violent bootcamp and lethal punishments.

Especially the MC's reactions make no sense, being traumatized and shocked after killing an adult recruit attacking him in a life or death trial, when not only was he raised in the slums, but he has already killed several people before for less, and showed no remorse.

Now he defends himself from 6 people who ambush and try to kill them with superior numbers and weaponry, and he kills their leader. Then everyone, including his teammates and himself, suddenly treat him as some satan incarnate and even aim their weapons on him. Completely forgetting how 80% of them had already been killed arbitrarily by the trainers, each fight started had to be ended in death and how they had been ambushed by the others.

So the idiotic MC goes straight to demand for his own execution because he killed a fellow recruit, not only refusing to explain any circumstances, but completely altering the facts to make himself face certain execution. Tbh, the author should have just had the MC executed right then and there and end the series for such idiotic writing.

Such ridiculously naive and inconsistent writing that is quite frustrating, especially when the story has so much potential

Pretty good story, idiot MC, so many plotholes and badly researched techniques

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The audio is chapter 28 is very jittery even while wearing headphones, otherwise it’s really good.

Chapter 28

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